Tassen Spellbinder

I tend to agree with CondradRice, and would like to throw in a few other thoughts I had. First of all- I highly doubt your main character is the only ...

My online thing is this: Occasionally, teachers will be beaten into a corner from determination to succeed – similar to Superman with kryptonite. this line sort of confused me for ...

(Each time an unlike way), just for my spine to come Crashing to the ground, right before I attain the top I think the parentheses sound somewhat odd... Also, prehaps ...

Excellent. My only comment would be that the lines... "Sing about the wonders he will never see. Tell him ‘bout the strong man he will never be." ...threw me off ...

He scampers up the hill. The sun, is shining bright. Joyfully, he skips, as he ascends this great height. His mind, it is racing, with a high Expectation What awaits ...

[spoiler]SPOILER WARNING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have read the 4th Maximum Ride book, its called The Final Warning, if I recall correctly. It is horrible. Absolutely wretched. It starts too fas

VamPirate is right, that is moving. But I think all of the above are to blame. Our entire world, and everyone in it creating these societies are to blame, but ...